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by aleeusha

schedule March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Super precious!
person Annie Mouse
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Than" was used instead of "then" in the last sentence. If there wer any other grammatical errors, I didnt notice. It was hot, and the characters were pretty much in character.
So hot.
But what about Mokuba? What happened to him?
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was a cute premise but the lack of capital letters and grammar mistakes kept making me groan. Obviously not enough to stop reading but at the very very least invest in you Caps key.
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
very sexy