rate_review Reviews

Maggiemay, this is an exceptional fanfic as per usual. I read all you other fanfic's before they were deleted (sad face) and you are by far, my favourite author. Amazing writing style, good flow in the stories and my OTP of Seto x Joey. I hope, one day you'll post you're other fanfic's up on here, so I can relive the stories. Until then, thanks for being a great author XD

Awww, sooo much WAFF, but I totally enjoyed it! As usual another great Seto/Jou story. I can't get enough of these two.

I truly enjoy your stories, you're one of the reasons why I joined this site. I soon hope to be a fantastic writer like you. Keep posting stories for me to read!!

this was a great story. kept me reading all the way though. i confess i'm a pervert and when there is no sex i usually don't fully read the stories. i wish i could write stories like this. great job!

Wow, what a story! It worked great in the one shot format, and I loved the 'drink infomercials' you inserted between the different scenes. Kaiba is such a schemer! And Mai is so generous to have given her children away to the couple... Nice story! I enjoyed it!
-Milly

I couldn't find your email anywhere either (feels stupid about this back-and-forth-business......), so now I'm writing mine here, problem solved! egf_tas@hotmail.com
If my address is somehow blocked from the review, it is in my bio as well, at the top. We have much Jou-business to talk about!

I really liked the drinks-guide all the way through, nice gimick.. It was very interesting, though, I don't know if I'm Mary Sue-ing him too bad, but it felt just a little bit like a betrayal of Jou's character that he would use such underhanded methods to try and break Kaiba and his boyfriend apart, but not out of character for Kaiba to do something like that.. Though, it was kind of a nice alternative to try and have Jou try to manipulate Kaiba for a change, but yeah.. I was really confused about Mai's kids and what that godfather-agreement really meant, and at the beginning I had thought that Valon would be sad to see the kids go, but I guess not.. And when I read the name of the eldest son, I almost thought this was a very strange AU for the other story Winding Road..
And sorry that I've been so damn absent, but I don't really have time to read all the chapters in the other one again (the one with slight homophobic Jou & Honda), Uni and travels and hospitals keep stealing my time away! Don't even really get anything written either.. I really need more than 24 hours in a day!

OMFG!!!!!! Hell!!!! that was like slam the B@#th....fantastic!!!!

I loved it the guide to the drinks and the schemings of two men who were destined to be together. Mai was a schemer too. She lost big time. I think, her and Valon will be happer this way. Jou still has a soft heart and cares for Mai even though he does not love her.

Interesting progression of events