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schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM

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person Lella
schedule November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! I read this awhile ago since a love triangle sounded interesting. Wasn't sure if the author was still active though (you never know if a fic is dropped), so I was bummed when I reached the end of chapter 6. It's cool seeing more of what happens next.
D: I feel bad for all three of them; I hope Yugi figures out what he's gonna do!
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the story its quite well written.

Personally I'd really like to see it end up Yugi/Anzu/Jonouchi, I know the synopsis indicates otherwise but I hope that's not set in stone. They both love Yugi and Yugi loves them I don't see why it couldn't work.
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is this heading for a threesome? Or is that just me reading things into it? It totally has a threesome feel, particularly with this chapter from Anzu's POV. Ah, well, maybe just wishful thinking;)

Just wanted to let yo know that I'm enjoying this! The high school uncertainty is well captured, so I'm looking forward to seeing how every thing (or everyone?) comes together. I also loved Jou in the shower. In scene, well shown details. I'll be watching for the next update!
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Grandpa! I forgot to mention Grandpa! GRANDPA! Old man making poor Yugi all befuddled with innuendos and advice he doesn't get was cute. It reminds me of coming home from college one day and realizing that there were all kinds of undercurrents to the comments my grandmother would make, seemingly to herself, that always my poor mom stuttered and cough. I like the Grandpa scene!
schedule July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... interesting. Anzu is getting a clue, even if the seed was planted by Miho. And that No Offence thing... LOL... makes me think of that skit in The Fast Show. XD

Definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes next. :D
person Anon
schedule June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and your other stories! Keep up the good work. I can't wait for more!
person Noonespecial
schedule May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's me again. Late, but I remember your story and I'mvery glad you continued it!
I love your pacing, how slow and thoughtful it is. You give the readers time to ponder on the situation, to feel all the smalldifferences and details. Thogh I can't say I'm not eager to see thejuacy stuff. XD
You captured Yugi's feelings about Anzu very well. All the thoughts, the awkwardness... Simply brilliant.
I'm so happy to read such a wonderful Wishshipping fic! I really hope you won'tleave it. Thank you for your wonderful job!
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do like this one. Poor Yugi seems to be totally confused about everything. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. :)
person Noonespecial
schedule April 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's amazing. So tense and well-written! I love the pace this story has, it doesn't jums straight to sex, it takes time to develop. And your characterisations are superb. Yuugi, Jonouchi, their friends (I especially liked your portrayal of Ryou)... Can't wait to see more. A good story with Wishshipping is a rarity. Thank you for writing it!