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person Fel5
schedule June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is fun. Not in the haha-kind-of-way, but rather delightful. It's nice to see you taking a shot at a more grown-up Jou and emotionally still unbalanced Kaiba. Been a while since I lounged in the YGO-Fandom, but this story reminds of how much fun it actually is. Can't wait to see how Kaiba's going to react to Jou's lure
person lafiel
schedule May 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love the story
person Sarina
schedule May 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Argh, you are such an amazing writer!! Update more please! This story is SO GOOD!
person angel_dove
schedule May 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awww poor Mokuba. At least Jou was there to help him. I loved the chapter. I was almost crying. I felt so bady for Mokuba. I can't wait for more
person FlutterVi
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is seriously one of the few fanfictions I've had the good fortune to find. You've balanced everyday life, emotional feeling, and sexiness very well, and you've done it in a very realistic way that I would imagine to be true to the characters. I find myself checking the page every day with hopes of a new chapter. Keep it up! :3
person aleeusha
schedule April 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU SOO MUCH! i been waiting forever for you too update! i squeaked when i saw! oh thank you!i lurve this story so much- now ill just twiddle my thumbs while i wait for the next tidbit
person Nope
schedule April 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahh god why do you keep doing this? In the name of all that is holy, write more!!
person angel_dove
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that's a beautiful chapter. I especially loved the interaction between Kaiba and Mokuba at the end. Lovely job. I still can't wait for more.
person Rain
schedule April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love realistic you're keeping Joey. I'm glad that you didn't jump into the sexual urges and attraction. It makes them feel more real. Keep it up! I look forward to your next update. :D
schedule April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've only just stumbled upon this, but I have to say, I'm thoroughly intrigued. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love you descriptors, and the comparisons you made within the Kaiba Mansion. But you should already know I like most of the things you write ^^