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January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello I loved your fic, I love, I love this couple, JoeyxMokuba, Joey can also be seme lol, hopefully do more fics of them continues, thanks and kisses.
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April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Since I mentioned this story earlier when I spoke to you, I thought that I would re-read it and post something about it. I can't believe I didn't review this!
You got the mood down very well. It wasn't necessarily steamy, but it didn't have to be. It was intimate and natural, and I can tell that's what you were going for. I especially loved the narration you used, and your diction changed depending on the character whose perspective was being given. It was very realistic, very slice-of-life-ish, and I encourage you to write more. I loved reading it! I'm a big fan of Moku x Jou, despite some of my more recent pursuits with Mokuba's character, and I'm glad I got the chance to re-read this! Kudos to you!
You got the mood down very well. It wasn't necessarily steamy, but it didn't have to be. It was intimate and natural, and I can tell that's what you were going for. I especially loved the narration you used, and your diction changed depending on the character whose perspective was being given. It was very realistic, very slice-of-life-ish, and I encourage you to write more. I loved reading it! I'm a big fan of Moku x Jou, despite some of my more recent pursuits with Mokuba's character, and I'm glad I got the chance to re-read this! Kudos to you!
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December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for this fic darling! I thought every bit of this was extremely cute/funny.I love how Jonouchi kept bumping into things! I love how he insulted Seto. It was so adorable. I found their relationship so believable. So cute!