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by lostintheheartland

schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ, this just keeps twisting! Mai and Valon are both raving mad.. How is Jou going to get to Japan? And Kaiba too, all this travelling in-and-out of countries is such a giant mix-up, it's gotta go wrong somehow.. I'm just gonna stop guessing, I keep getting it wrong anyway.
person catti
schedule December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
smexi beshis, smexi beshis, smexi beshis..(still think Anzu's a slut..hahaha, no really I do).....*huggles the loves*....catti
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I can not get excited a bit, but I'll try. So.. Anzu was kinda set up, and kinda did something stupid, and then jumped alot to conclusions. But I'm curious about what will happen with Jou and Seto, and Mai and Valon! I hope Mai isn't going to threaten suicide or something like that..
person dragonlady222
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad the truth is coming out for more than just Seto and Jou. Both groups had to deal with conniving bitches, Otogi and Mai. It's hard to believe that a mother would kill her own son to get him out of her way. I see it in the news all the time but I still find it hard to believe. Maybe now, Atemu and Yugi can forgive tea and move on without being enemies and hating. I feel bad for Honda.
person Neon
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I was wondering, I got REALLY addicted to this story.....And it says the story is complete but....nothing was really resolved? D: -cry-
person catti
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
laughs evilly...oh I have you on FB..maybe Ill send some dirtly little pictures...hahahahahaha...btw..have I told you lately that I JUST LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Vic! To remember your own death and feel like you've betrayed your father at the same time. The small things between Jou and Seto are so sweet. I'm glad that Mokuba is finally back, so to speak, but it was kinda sad that he needed that much of a show to be convinced. Anzu is in for a serious eye-opener concerning Yugi and Atemu. I'm worried about Kisara, what will she do? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person catti
schedule December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dear KAMI!!!!!!...you are quite the evil woman...that was fricken awesome!!! but must say have been waiting days for you to IM me!!! WHERE ARE YOU maggie???? miss you to pieces...but now you have to update this story like NOW!!! because it too AWESOME...catti
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sad face, is Mokuba that skeptical of everything? Despite all the weird things he saw when he was younger? I hope Anzu really is comming around, and not just somehow manipulating.. This was such a sweet chapter, and all the interation between Jou and Seto made me smile heaps. Add Vic and I'm sold. I'm enjoying this calm before the storm that I'm fearing will come. But, oh my, Mai and Jou really have been dealing with all sorts of problems? I won't get too attached to Mai, I just can't help but feel sorry for her.. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! I hope all of your problems here on AFF will end soon, it's not okay.
I loved this part; "You can't peel potatoes without needing a blood-transfusion" XD
schedule December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am so sad for Mai.. She is in an impossible situation.. But I fully understand Jou. I'm looking forward to the next morning when those three wake up together! Should be interesting :P