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for Winding Road

by lostintheheartland

person catti
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whine and it shall be done!!!! ha....ok Jou's hair sounds really, really bad...Otogi in Mai's body is really, really scary....Still think the threesome of Yami, Yugi, and Tea is flippin scary...I like that word, SCARY!!...catti
person awed
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woaaa this get more complicated by the minute and im loving it poor jou "by brains bout to explode to lol" awwwwwwwwwww this is great anyways im so glad u started writing again i loved your stories i read your O T M story and was addictiong by the first paragraph imagine how sad i was to find out u stop writing it then u left all together i almost cried.
so u can bet if anyone tries to do what they did to u before the gloves will be offf and the bats up
Keep rocking May
person dragonlady222
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Mai will never bother Jou or Seto again. Honda and Otogi should be happy. Otogi will have Honda and he will have children. Hopefully, Otogi will not be so jealous of him anymore. If Honda can stomach being with a woman again.
person JOler
schedule December 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GLOMP

Happy holidays ... can't wait for the next chapter.

person dragonlady222
schedule December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Otogi is very selfish and unsure of himself. He hurt a lot of people with his jealousy, most of all his own lover. I hope that Honda can figure out the right thing to do. Yugi and Atemu will protect Anzu. Mai is in for a big shock when she sees Jounouchi. I'm glad that Seto is taking things slow and making sure Jou is ready. I would love for you to post the new story on here. Roses is one of my favorites and one of the first fanfics I ever read.
person catti
schedule December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! THREESOME? YUCK!!!!! still think you should send Bakura's pets to Kisara....ha
person dragonlady222
schedule December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Bakura but he should have known better. Kisara is an idiot but deserves everything she gets. I'm glad Kaiba is rid of her. Jou and him will be better suited to each other.
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hm.. lots of things moving, me trying to follow and slightly .... uneasy at everything. Jou being with Seto because of a debt can practically only end badly and Jou overreacting, I suppose, is only right, but still.. I'm looking forward to all this Kisara-business to go away, she is unbelievably annoying, though I fear she will be joined soon by Mai.. I really do like Bakura, though!
person catti
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I always knew why I hated Mai, now you gave me more of a reason to hate her......MIND CRUSH HER, YAMI!!!!!catti.
person dragonlady222
schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mai is a psychotic bitch. DOes she actually believe Jou would take her bac? She is even more crazy than I thought and a pedophile, too. SHe never even considered that is might be her fault that Jou couldn't get it up or last long. Vic is better off without her and far from her.