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August 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Continue plz!!!! I really love your works!
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November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible story. I truly enjoyed it from start to finish. It is very well written and I like how it flows. It has a solid beginning, and middle. The end of this leaves more than enough to start another story. I love your work. Thank you for sharing this.
Just so you know, I do have some questions. In the first chapter it says that Jounouchi smokes a cigarette before he enters the party. Is he just smoking from stress or is he smoking regularly? Why are none of Jounouchi's associates from NASCAR sending messages to him when he is dealing with the trial of Valon? Even if they were all competitors, he should have made at least 1 friend right? I would love to see this continued, so much I think was left undone. Not just the comment made by Gaia and the fact that Jou would be PISSED to find out that Seto and the others were keeping the knowledge that Seto was his soul mate away from him, but the interactions between Jounouchi, Seto, and Vic, the interactions between Jou, Honda and Otogi, and how Mokuba would make up for the fact that he didn't believe in and trust his brother. So much more could be done with this story. At least that is the way I feel. I'm so glad I stayed up for 2 days to get this done. Thank you.
Arielle Stott
Just so you know, I do have some questions. In the first chapter it says that Jounouchi smokes a cigarette before he enters the party. Is he just smoking from stress or is he smoking regularly? Why are none of Jounouchi's associates from NASCAR sending messages to him when he is dealing with the trial of Valon? Even if they were all competitors, he should have made at least 1 friend right? I would love to see this continued, so much I think was left undone. Not just the comment made by Gaia and the fact that Jou would be PISSED to find out that Seto and the others were keeping the knowledge that Seto was his soul mate away from him, but the interactions between Jounouchi, Seto, and Vic, the interactions between Jou, Honda and Otogi, and how Mokuba would make up for the fact that he didn't believe in and trust his brother. So much more could be done with this story. At least that is the way I feel. I'm so glad I stayed up for 2 days to get this done. Thank you.
Arielle Stott
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!!
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December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Will this story have an epilogue? I hope it does.
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December 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story was down right awesome! I love how you deplict the characters the way you do. As in doing so you literally pull your readers deep into the story, keeping them on the edge of their seats from beginning to end.
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December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Happy, happy, Joy, joy, you're back **glomps** we've missed you, and your awesome stories.
This one is a bit to dark. But I st I'll love I'm on the third chapter.
This one is a bit to dark. But I st I'll love I'm on the third chapter.
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October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So, I just finished reading your story. It was amazing. I was hooked ten pages in to the first chapter. I love the humor and wit you bring to the characters along with the amazing drama filled plots. I can't wait to read your other stories. I'm going to start Lost and Found afte I finsih this message. The way you write makes the story so easy to visualize and I truly enjoy that. You have restored my faith in fanfiction I have read some really bad ones. So thank you, and please continue writing I truly enjoy your work.
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want to know who Jou's soulmate is! I want to see Kaiba with a bun in his oven! pleeeease?
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September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Maggie, I effing live. Your stories. As soon as I saw your username, I was so mad at whoever decided they could get some easy fans. Went to your page and saw the link to little dragon and fell in love with your stories all over again. Keep writing!
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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about anyone else, but I would LOVE to see a sequel! And a pregnant Seto? Please oh please oh please oh please oh please....