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July 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
come back to your story. i need to know what happens.
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February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love your story! please keep it going!
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. After reading chapter 2.. normally I'd say go for the realistic happy ending, but.. somehow I actualy think that Seto SHOULD die trying after having tried and tried and tried. In a car-crash, driving home from his last attempt at getting Jou back. Just to have fate bite his ass.. Maybe even having Jou start to question his decision even more and then just as he is regretting saying no again and he calls Seto to tell him to come back, and while talking with Jou Seto crashes in his car. Very evil idea.. Don't know if it's too bad? But then I'm just being sadistic, ain't I? Happy ending could work as well.
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
blushes* well I do write so perhaps I'm the Maggiemay you read. Glad you enjoy my stories. I still vote for a happy ending... Heh if it were me (It's not so I understand you will write as your muses dictate) I would have Jou request a world tour, visiting orphanages as they go... adopting the children they love. Heee can you imagine Seto devoted to loving Jou and their (Cheaper by the dozen) Children. HAAA hilarity. Oh that is a vicious bunny - with fangs and all...
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the double review - but this struck me as hilarious.
OH not cheaper by the dozen - BAKERS DOZEN - since you make a point of 13 being a curse - they turn it into a blessing... ROFL
OH not cheaper by the dozen - BAKERS DOZEN - since you make a point of 13 being a curse - they turn it into a blessing... ROFL
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November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah I enjoyed this very much, although I would probably not read it if it's a bad ending. I like happy endings. I vote they get together.
Make-up songs
Feist -So Sorry
The Cure - Boys Don't Cry
Make-up songs
Feist -So Sorry
The Cure - Boys Don't Cry
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November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this actually worked really well, with the lyrics inside the text. awesome! there were a few sentences that got repetitive and some mightt've been a little bit OOC for jou, but nothing too bad. it's very dangerous to ask for songs!! now I have too many to count circling my brain and I don't know which to choose!!
"you and me" by lifehouse - fits either of the
"almost lover" by a fine frenzy - really broken-love song!!
"save tonight" by eagle eye cherry - could very well be for seto
"say no more" by mads langer - definitely a song from jou to seto
"i will love you monday (365)" by aura dione - them both, seto maybe mostly?
and just so you know, i've really tried to contain myself XD
"you and me" by lifehouse - fits either of the
"almost lover" by a fine frenzy - really broken-love song!!
"save tonight" by eagle eye cherry - could very well be for seto
"say no more" by mads langer - definitely a song from jou to seto
"i will love you monday (365)" by aura dione - them both, seto maybe mostly?
and just so you know, i've really tried to contain myself XD