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July 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This desperately needs an update. A babe like Aki is too hot to leave hanging after only one fuck.
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pls update soon.
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October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was quite good, I enjoyed it. A couple of mistakes to point out though.
You said Studios when you meant Studious.
You said deviliries when you meant deliveries.
I'm not sure what program you're using but I'd switch to one that has auto spell check, you'll find mistakes like those are easy to avoid.
As I said. I really liked it. Not a fan of 5D's really, much prefer the original YGO series (I hope you're not done making stories with those characters, I'm still pulling for a Yugi/Mai story from you.) but the women are quite attractive.
I don't mind the implication that Divine used Aki for sex, it's certainly not the first time its been suggested judging from some of the archived stories on this site.
Overall I like the direction this story is heading. I would like to see more please.
You said Studios when you meant Studious.
You said deviliries when you meant deliveries.
I'm not sure what program you're using but I'd switch to one that has auto spell check, you'll find mistakes like those are easy to avoid.
As I said. I really liked it. Not a fan of 5D's really, much prefer the original YGO series (I hope you're not done making stories with those characters, I'm still pulling for a Yugi/Mai story from you.) but the women are quite attractive.
I don't mind the implication that Divine used Aki for sex, it's certainly not the first time its been suggested judging from some of the archived stories on this site.
Overall I like the direction this story is heading. I would like to see more please.