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oooo...hot fu...oops...fudge? hahahahahahaha

Good god man! After all that freezing and re freezing that body must be mangled and nasty by now! And Seto is being such a little prick in this... I love it XD lol, but hes having his kind moments to balance it out too. I love when things are so well balanced in a story. And I want to know what Yugi was dreaming too ;) Looking forward to more! And I don't know WHO could freaking flame this story but they really need to get over it. All the warnings for what this story is are there so there is no need to be rude to someone who is being nice enough to share their work.

Aww yay happy to hear it gives you the warm fuzzies :D And oh my I get to pick XD! But since I don't know what they are about maybe letting me pick is a bad idea :P lol. I remember winner takes all. It was not one of my favorites but I still read it and ending up giving it 5 stars lol. Ohh KATS!!! I remember that so well! That was the very last story I read from you before you vanished. But it was only the first chapter and I was looking forward to more- only to be told you had left after a story was stolen :( The darkness ones sound like they might have been... but I've read a lot of yugioh stories with darkness in the name so I can't be sure without a quick summary, sorry. The other story you named I never saw posted. I hope that was helpful!

They all have trust issues. Seto needs to bend a little. He is really torturing them by having the body brought back.

Hmm ... Even though my last review was mysteriously erased ... Glad the rumors were unsubstantiated by the way since I KNOW you have no need to beg for reviews or hold chaps hostage ... And I know how hectic things have been lately ... I will review again.

Glad to see we were able to coax you back to giving AFF a try again, though I understand why you were so reluctant to come back. I'm also glad we were able to convince you to give this story a chance since you thought it was so terrible. You are way too insecure when trying out a new genre or sub-genre, but you did well. I can hardly wait for the comedy you have on the back burner to be postable, but I also know it may be a while.

Love how Seto is so blind to 'normal' reactions and assumes that he is the one and only option he's been leaving for Jou and Yugi ... only for them to find another option each time.

Kaiba kinda.. frustrates me. How did he think they would react? When your abusive drunk bastard of father is killed by your best friend and his corpse keeps on showing up although it has been burried and dumped in various places, you don't really go to your new lover and say 'Hey new lover who I am still insecure around and unsure about, the dead body of my father, which we burried in an effort to evade the justice system because we killed him, it keeps coming back and turning up in my house, could you possibly help us get rid of it?' . seriously?? I'd be going frantic and mental if the body of my father kept on showing up. In some stories you skip through the story to get to the lemony parts, in this story I find myself skipping through the kiss in order to read more of the story-line. Then I pulled myself up by the nape-hairs and went back and read the kiss. Very hot.
I don't know how you are going to have this work out between the characters, but I'm anxious to read it! TBH? Is that a reference to this story? Oh, I wouldn't know what to call this genre. But it's awesome :)

OK I have to be the creepy fan for a second and tell you just how much I squealed when I clicked on this story and saw it was you! I had to click before I could even start reading to see if it was THE Maggiemay or someone just using the name. I had a total fangirl moment over your return. You have no clue how much I missed your stories.

Now to the story! I don't remember to many threesome stories by you but now I'm thinking you should write alot more of them ^.^ I love the story so far. The interactions had me smiling the whole time. And the background story is rather dark but I'm still finding it enjoyable and enjoying how twistedly sweet Seto is being >:3 I cant wait to read more when you get time to post!

Oooh, poor Yugi! Glad to see that Jou reacts effeciently in the given situation. So.. the bar-dude is dead, after being painfully broken from top to bottom.. Good. But. Did they get to dump the body before going home? And is that the froozen package that Kaiba's helo's picked up? So Kaiba really will keep this whole thing under wraps from Yugi and Jou, huh.. I wonder how this relationship will work out, very curious!

Yugi climbing Jou like a cat in a tree was one of the funniest things I ever read, until Jou woke up with his crotch in his face. I almost fell out of my chair.

Love the story so far. Poor Yugi but Jou is right he would never last in jail.

That was not a happy first time for Seto, harsh, but I could kinda see it happening. Anzu might've only liked Atemu, but Atemu did feel something for Yugi, right? I wonder what he said to Anzu when Yugi was away.. I find Seto's amusement over Jou's trouble with his FATHER'S body slightly, no not slightly, HIGHLY disturbing. That's.. just not right. And is he really going to let them show up at that creep's bar wearing those ridiculous shorts?? He might've called the boss of that Yakuza-family and got him to start fixing things, but still??
This story is playing in my head as an alarming mix of a REALLY scary horror-movie and a humorous romantic/porn movie. In one of the previous chapters when they found the body behind the sofa, I practically had a soundtrack going in my head and camrea-angle and everything for making that a movie-shot. It was scary.