rate_review Reviews

Heya.

Wow completely different twist to what I was expecting. And of course Kaiba manages to rationalise it! Definitely enjoyed reading this and now I will be moving straight onto one of your other stories!

Zx

I am so very very glad you have decided to start posting on aff again. I first fell in love with your stories when I began to read Golden Lights. I was not able to finish the story before you closed your account due to the utter stupidity of people. I am beyond grateful that you have continued writing, and I promise to review every story you post as I read it. Thank you so much for all your hard work. And thank you for letting me read your well written, and original stories. I look forward to reading all of your work, when I can find it.

Arie

Ummmm hi, I hate to be annoying but ah I saw no email on your profile, so this is the only way I see to ask you a question but ahhh..... what happened to winding roads? I just went to re read what was up so far and it's gone :(

I love this story! So over the top, but also grounded in such wonderful details. I love the suit fitting, and how Jou never loses track of the improtance of every day things, like housework. It keeps the over the top elements grounded and keeps the story flowing. So happy to see you posting on here again!

I just love reading this story and please are you going to make a sequel to it.I just had to laugh when Yugi scaled Seto was he a cat in a previous life.

Oh, the end! Wow.. Who is the other body in the water? The one that Honda saw? I'm slightly confused, it looks like bits and pieces and larger chumps are missing from the story? But I'm happy to see a happy ending, I recently embarked on an author who almost consistently doesn't have ANY happy endings so, I'm glad that this one had, and managed to make sense. Though. Seto's explanation of the magic. 'Cross dimentional energy yadda yadda', no way. It's magic, Seto, just accept it. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. And I'm glad that you didn't just magically have Yugi issues about Atemu dissapear. But it's a bit of a stretch on Seto's side to say that he wasn't real.
I can choose? *blushblush* uummmmmmmmhhh..... I don't want Seto to be a serial killer, just yet, so I guess the one where they are kittens? (wtf, kittens? like with ears or something?). Now, I'm off to read the other one :P. Anyway, awesome story! Well-ended and gosh, they really are hot together, aren't they?

Wait, but I... but..ohh.... I don't know what confuses me more. Who's body it was that Honda found in the river before? Or Seto, of all people, using shadow magic lol? Wow.

Is that it? Is there more? I would like see a chapter dealing more with how Yugi felt with Atemu and Anzu. I liked the story overall with the running gag of Seto exuming the body everytime and returning it to Jou's freezer. I just want to see if there is going to be a chapter dealt with his feelings. It was not very clear on how Atemu felt about Yugi or how Yugi felt about the whole thing.

Great ending. I'm glad they got the air all cleared and are happy together and Jou's dad will never bother them again. I'm sure they will be happy with each other.

I hope they can get rid of the body safely and Seto learns to trust them more and I hope it stays gone this time. They are trying to protect him after all. Jou's dad is more trouble dead than he was alive and causing even more problems for them. I am glad they are getting along so well.