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for The Pharoah and Prince's Lover

by Star9309

schedule May 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow their enemy starts to move... is their enemy came from their past? is he is... how did he escape from shadow realm? :D... And how sweet between Ishizu and Malik... Malik really miss her sis!~

Can't wait for the next chaps...
schedule May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
is it malik's first time to dream like that...

update soon...
schedule May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so cute and awesome. Marik made me laugh when he made Bakura punch him to see if he was dreaming about seeing his Hikari at the club. It was sad when the other Yamis were looking for their Hikaris. He also almost made me cry when he said he wanted to get together with Malik and get him pregnant again to start another family. The picture of the Hikari's in the past is soo cute and adorable, that I hope they all get pregnant again so they can all have their family and kids again. I can't wait for the next chapter also well when the Yamis and Hikaris meet and the reaction that will take place. Awesome I can't wait to see Ryou and Malik's dreams of their past-self. Also can't wait for the showdown to happen and for the enemy to be revealed. Please update soon as I want to read the next chapter so much.
schedule May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was close for Marik and Malik... but how sad for him and Atemu and Yami, they didn't saw both their child unlike Akefia, Bakura, Seth and Seto. And Marik was already miss and very desperate for his hikari... he was planning to get Malik pregnant if he sees him... tsk tsk tsk! Malik should better hide... *grin*

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schedule May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. It was so cute to see a dream in both of Malik's and Ryou's past-self view point. It was sad to see the children killed, I cried when I read it. What was the age of Akhom as well as the twins? Also how long til the Yamis and Hikaris meet, I just can't wait for the meeting. Are they going to meet the same day as the enemy reveals himself to the Hikaris? And what game is going to happen on Friday with the enemy? I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. Awww that was so cute seeing Jono's son and that he had puppy eyes like Heba. So was Jono's son killed before he was? So if all the Hikaris were either pregnant or had their child in the past, what happened to the children? It was great to see that two out of the four Hikari's have seen that the Yamis are in japan. Are we going to see the Yamis point of view of the bar cause I want to know if one of them noiced Malik there? Please can you put some of Ryou's and Malik's dreams of their point of view of the past? Please update soon, this fanfic is so addicting, I love reading it and want to read to the end of it.
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ya... like like @Mizuchan24 it is very addicting. I always check if you already updated the story... I also save it 'coz if I don't have an internet and if I want to read it, I can just open it...:D

Wow! Joey remember the past and now he knows and saw the Kaibas in the news... But how only Joey remember his past and for Ryou why is it when he dream some of it he can't remember some of them?

Can I point something? and if it is okay...can I tell you in pm not in review?

Thanks! and I can't really wait for the next chap!~
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Malik was really upset... He must really misses his sister so much and Yugi really handle well...

hhhhmmm.. I can't wait to know who called Yugi. Is it an ally or an enemy?

Sorry for too many questions but are the other Hikaris from the past were also pregnant?

Thanks and I hope you really going to finish this story... Gambatte!~
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. The flashback was so cute and the end made me want to cry. Is the fact that Heba was pregnant when he and the child died, the reason Yami is more upset when Atemu or anyone asks about the Hikaris? I'm only asking cause he was the one yelling at Bakura, Akefia and Marik were they were breaking stuff in their grief. Were the other Hikaris pregnant in the past with Heba? Are we going to see any of the other Hikari's dreams and their point of view of the past besides Yugi's? I can't wait to find out who called Yugi and what is going to happen on Friday. I think the person is the enemy since they told Yugi not to go to Kaiba Corp. and see the Yamis. Please update soon.
schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can;t wait for the next update. Since Heba was pregnant in the past, were the other Hikari's pregnant with Heba before they were killed. Are Yugi and the others able to get pregnant in the present when they find out who their Yamis are? What happened to Heba's baby or was he killed before the baby's was born. Please update soon.