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for The Pharoah and Prince's Lover

by Star9309

schedule April 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love this story. I'm so glad you came to write it again. I have a question and wanted to know why in the first chapter there is eight people standing around a dead Heba but in the other chapters to follow there is only seven Yami. I was wondering what happened to Marik's twin from the first writing of this story and how come he isn't in it anymore. I can't wait for you to update. Thank you for a awesome and great story.

person smint45
schedule March 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I really like this story so far!!! Hope to see another update soon!!!

person kayci147
schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Plz plz plz write more or a sequel! I love this story
person Arlena
schedule December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!!
person nari-chan
schedule November 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
omg, i love this story !!!! i have read all the posted chapters and am now hooked like a crack addict. please please update again soon i cant wait to read more of this wonderful story !!!!!!
and you did a great lemon scene by the way :)
person cassie
schedule September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hope there will be more. AtemuxYuugixYami
person Athena
schedule September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It is difficult to write a review or comment on a WIP without begging for a new chapter. But as deeply as I want one, I'll try to hold back my inner FanFic-FanGirl and simply say that this is one of the first times I have really enjoyed the idea of Puppyshipping. I've always enjoyed Puzzleshipping and find it interesting to see different people's take on Yami, Yugi and Atem's personalities. The fact that you actually have three seperate personalities for them pleases my inner critic and I happily look forward to reading how the Hikaris react once completely alone with their Yamis. Can't wait for this ship to set full sail on the open sea, shall we say XD
person yu
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love AtemuxYuugixYami. Hope there be more soon.
schedule August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
that was good... I cant wait to read what happens next with the others... please update when you can
person Keara
schedule August 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well this is certainly one very well done and rounded fic so far though joey reaction leaves me curious and me thinks isis is in for it when the find out she knew exactly where they were but to protect them she lied to them all if it wasn't for joy remembering it could have gone so much worse huh well her choice her price keep up the great work gtg now ja me