rate_review Reviews

Please continue soon!

May I start by saying it is a very good story. However there seemed to be a lot of grammar issues through out the story that made it harder to get through. I understand that English may not be your first language because that is the case for many authors. I feel you would benefit from a beta reader. Even your summary had some grammar problems that may turn many readers off from your story. That is a shame if that is the case. The story is off to a wonderful start and has great potential if you fix your grammar usage. So please try and find some one to edit your story. I think you will find you get more readers and more great reviews.

best of luck and keep writing

Excited for more!