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Still hoping this fic willl be continued :)

On the manga covers and spreads, everyone's eyes change color and sometimes their hair even changes color. Yami alone has had red, violet, brown, green, and blue eyes. I really think they just pick whatever color is closet to them on the table and use that, haha! Pegasus does actually add "boy" after peoples' names in the Japanese, and he also says random words in English and cusses in English as well.

You've got a few spelling errors but otherwise this is pretty nice. Dark, but nice. I like this pairing and would like to see more. :)

Please sir, can I have some more.

I love Ryou being tortured. He's just so..rape-able. mmm.

Ah~ absolutely beautiful work, it's not often I stay interested in a story (though with the sex scenes, who wouldn't stay interested. Hnnng.) I love your style of writing, the way you're descriptive with things and how it all flows. I love rare pairings such as these, too. I'm looking forward to another update! :)

That's an excellent first chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if Yami Bakura would come into the picture and if Ryou would escape. So many questions! Please update soon.

I really enjoyed this chapter, it was well written and intriguing. I enjoyed how you used a nice amount of description and imagery without dragging things out. Ryou's manga characterization was well written along with the suspense of the kidnapping scene. Please write more.