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for Kaiba's New Assistant

by AtomBunny

person Overlyobessed
schedule November 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story, love the touch with Mrs Doyle at the end :D
person :)
schedule June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing. :)
schedule October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awwww, she got to go home. that's awesome.
Wow, Jou has mellowed Kaiba out lots!
Dice boy has a LOT to make upp for and how.
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woooooooohoooooooooooo go gettem kaiba Kun. Kick arse.
you may not be entirely happy with it but I'm perfectly content. I love seeing pricks get their dues. ^^
person mangaworm4u
schedule July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is coming along great! Is the thing your working on is Jou's biological mother? While I admit it is a big mystery to the reader, I can also see how tough it would be to write her in since it is a big curve ball and there is no mention of her in the original series to work from. Maybe you should have her happen before Jou was born and she died or something, if you decide to work on it.
schedule July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Go Seto! Get those ... (insert appropriate creative curse/insult here)and expose them for buroratic nastards that they are. Hopefully Seto's plan will work. Jou's life has been crap enough as it is.
person BLL
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GWAH!!! Nooooo!!! WHY!?!? Why is Jounouchi always tortured so? *sniffle* I hope he wasn't hurt too badly.

This story is progressing swimmingly. ^_^ As always, keep up the great work!
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ah crap! big squishy piles of it. Hell in a handbasket much.
schedule June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great update!
person dark-hunteress
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed dis story
pls update agian soon