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May 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this. It was a refreshing change.
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November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THE SEX SCENES THE STORY IS ALSO GREAT!!! XD
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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This chapter was THE FUCKING SHIT.
I don't know what else I can say about it. It was just fantastic. OH MY GOD you SO know your shit. '... sheathed himself into...' was THE best sex action verb ever invoked in all smut. You are brilliant. Stop fishing around for concrit! You don't need any!
-Milly
This chapter was THE FUCKING SHIT.
I don't know what else I can say about it. It was just fantastic. OH MY GOD you SO know your shit. '... sheathed himself into...' was THE best sex action verb ever invoked in all smut. You are brilliant. Stop fishing around for concrit! You don't need any!
-Milly
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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This story was full of awesome. You win at life.
And on those very cliche sentences, I bid you farewell... for now.
-Milly
(Where did you first publish this story? on ffnet? on LJ?)
This story was full of awesome. You win at life.
And on those very cliche sentences, I bid you farewell... for now.
-Milly
(Where did you first publish this story? on ffnet? on LJ?)
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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Damn you are good at this. You know your shit, ddr. You don't actually need any feedback. You make me ship grown!Mokuba x pretty much anyone, now.
Well, I lied. You do need some feedback - the feedback that spells ***MOAR!!!***
(on a side note, what's up with that 'scene shift/change' thingy? you have to quit doing that!)
Damn you are good at this. You know your shit, ddr. You don't actually need any feedback. You make me ship grown!Mokuba x pretty much anyone, now.
Well, I lied. You do need some feedback - the feedback that spells ***MOAR!!!***
(on a side note, what's up with that 'scene shift/change' thingy? you have to quit doing that!)
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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This is really good. So far, it's just been really really good. You're especially good with characterization - it seems effortless - and your smooth, invisible pacing. I wished I could read some of your earlier works just to compare, because it really seems like this writing style that you have right now, well it seems like you've been writing a lot for a long time and that you really had the chance to perfect your technique. Am I making any sense?
Anyway, LOVE HOTEL.
Yes.
I adore you for making this welcome element of Japanese culture part of your story.
-Milly
This is really good. So far, it's just been really really good. You're especially good with characterization - it seems effortless - and your smooth, invisible pacing. I wished I could read some of your earlier works just to compare, because it really seems like this writing style that you have right now, well it seems like you've been writing a lot for a long time and that you really had the chance to perfect your technique. Am I making any sense?
Anyway, LOVE HOTEL.
Yes.
I adore you for making this welcome element of Japanese culture part of your story.
-Milly
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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Every additional chapter without a lemon is like a level-up for the lemon itself. Unless the authors delves into some shitty beat-around-the-bush, soap-opera-drama-ish shit... Thank Gods you aren't taking that route.
LAP DANCE.
Another thing I've never read in a fic. I adore you. Did I mention I loved your Mokuba's personality? And the realism of your drunks? Gosh I love this story.
-Milly
Every additional chapter without a lemon is like a level-up for the lemon itself. Unless the authors delves into some shitty beat-around-the-bush, soap-opera-drama-ish shit... Thank Gods you aren't taking that route.
LAP DANCE.
Another thing I've never read in a fic. I adore you. Did I mention I loved your Mokuba's personality? And the realism of your drunks? Gosh I love this story.
-Milly
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November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey ddr! Happy... Birthday?
First, a quote. "growing up has made me miss the ease with which I could see something as a possible story plot."
THIS. Can we call this phenomenon a tragedy? Pretty please?
Second, a review.
Yami's voice is hilarious. I love the humour. I like the premise. I'm hooked.
First, a quote. "growing up has made me miss the ease with which I could see something as a possible story plot."
THIS. Can we call this phenomenon a tragedy? Pretty please?
Second, a review.
Yami's voice is hilarious. I love the humour. I like the premise. I'm hooked.