rate_review Reviews

great story. Wish there was abit more to it, but it had a great end, and a wonderful story. Thanks for the great read.

Awesome story! <3

Awww, such a lovely happy ending. <3

Well, if it's any consolation for not putting it on ff.net, know that your loyal fans are still going to read your work here, regardless of ff.net's often hindering rules. *lol*

^___________^ well, everything was dealt with nicely~
but that hotel sure is.... faulty, with all their faults... something wrong with them.

that part whereby room service just entered the room, that part was really weird... even in normal hotels, room service doesn't do that.

next chap please!

- nekoii

Awwwww, so cute! Update soon.

Adoring reviews aplenty (including my own), so I'm not going to add another one to the list. This was a good chapter, and I'm still curious about the hotel staff, but (please, don't hate me for writing this...) this chapter feels too clean, too "well, that's all wrapped up"-ish. Since the main conflict was the Jou getting abandoned/how does Seto make up with him bit, it feels like a let down to have everything work out so easily. Maybe I'm just angst-deprived, but I really think this would be stronger with some more conflict. Still, very well written and fun to read!

heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey,

I received some heads up from my co-writer, ahsie, so searched a bit and found you. tadaaaaa.

good good. I'm following this.

- nekoii

ps: i think, this is.... the first puppyshipping im following on aff, in a long... long... time... O_O wow

You're real funny arn't you. What backgammon? what about the monopoly names. XD chess. checkers. snakes and ladders... XD

anyway. good going man! i like where this is headed but... just 2 chapters more?! how come it's ending so soon!!! *sad*

- nekoii

ohh, mystic interference! I'm just reviewing because I really, really want to see chapter 3, and I am hoping another view will be inspiring. More please!?!?