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Heh, nice. I always knew Yuugi had it in him to totally dominate Mai. Now he just needs to show Anzu and Mai that he can handle them both at the same time, no sweat!

I really, really enjoyed that chapter of the story. I enjoyed Mai being so horny and hopefully Anzu and Mai getting it on. I hope this leads to a threesome.

There is one thing about the chapter that bugged me though, you're using the wrong word in a couple of places.

"The blonde beauty began to suck vicariously" The word you're looking for is vigorously. If it were vicarious Yugi would be watching while Mai gave another guy head and imagining it was him. There's two other instances, one right near the end of this chapter and another in the second chapter.

As I said its a great chapter, that's just something minor that's been bothering me.

I really enjoyed that chapter, I particularly like the breast play and the flash back to Duellist Kingdom. I'd really like to see a Mai/Yugi/Anzu threesome with Yugi trying to decide who he likes screwing better.

Update soon please.

Yuugi's going to have to start varying his insults to keep the effect going; he should start calling her stupid, stuff like that!

I think the second chapter is as good as the first, I particularly like that there's a little bit of a story under the smut, I like the smut but a story inbetween that is a good thing too.

Please continue.

Heh, who knew that Anzu'd be such s freak in bed? And hey condoms and the pill don't work 100% of the time...

You should definately write a sequel to this, maybe featuring Yugi and Mai or more Yugi and Anzu because there isn't enough of it on this site.

Really liked it.

Damn, Yuugi'd have to be huge if Anzu could only get half of his cock in her huge mouth! XD LOL, JK.

You should totally write one where Anzu has a little 'growth spurt' and can't fit into her bra anymore, which just makes Yuugi even more aroused, heh heh heh.