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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've liked the last couple of chapters, they're a bit short but I enjoyed them none the less. I would like to see the story continue, but if you feel you want to end it, its up to you. I wouldn't mind seeing chapters alternate between Mai and Anzu for a little while.
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Yuugi's certainly got Mai whipped into shape, hasn't he? And to think that Anzzu's going to be taking it even harder, heh heh heh. And wouldn't it be interesting if Anzu had had a little "growth spurt", and all her shirts and bras got even tighter, if you know what I mean and I think you do.
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December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope this hasn't ended, I'd really like to see a couple more chapters, particularly another Mai & Yugi on their own because a lot of their first encounter was taken up with her trying to seduce him. I'd like to see him dominated for a change and her breasts played with.
If that was the final chapter it was a great story, I'm just disappointed it was so short.
If that was the final chapter it was a great story, I'm just disappointed it was so short.
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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pls Update Soon.
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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You could extend the story by having a girl from perhaps another Anime (Like Kagome from Inuyasha or Hevn from Get Backers, Yugi would really like her.) enter the story and try to seduce Yugi away. Then Mai & Anzu have to team up and win him back. It's just a suggestion.
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November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There was a phrase in the latest chapter I really thought was disgusting, its when Yugi called Anzu a "Cum Dumpster" its gross. I know its your story but could you not use that pharse again, I've really enjoyed the story up until now and frankly that almost ruined it for me.
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was definately the best chapter so far. The only thing I wonder is, is this the last chapter. If it was you need to add "The End" or if its not "To Be Continued..." to the end of the chapter just to make it clear.
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn! The only way this could get hotter is if Ishizu showed up, and Yuugi dominated her just as effortlessly.
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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, its good as a pre-amble to the hijinks of next chapter. On its own its ok, if a little short on them actually getting it on, maybe you could expand on the incident in the street make Mai go further and get a taste of Anzu's pussy with her tongue before they get discovered. I would really have like to have seen them get it on and go all the way (Eat each other out, 69 etc.), then Mai invite Yugi up so they can play with him before he plays with them.
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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Anzu and Mai may have done okay on their own, but now it's time for The Man, Yuugi, to step in and show both those sluts how its really done.