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I'd love to see a chapter regarding the homecoming, although I have a suggestion. Instead of just Yugi and Anzu they give their deal a rest for one night only and invite Jonouchi and Mai over for a foursome.

One last thing, is there any chance we could see a story in a similar vein to this one in the future but with a Mai/Yugi pairing?

I think there's one very simple, IMO obvious thing you could do the finale - remember Anzu *is* a dancer...

LOL! Love this story and that would be so funny if her dad caught them. And it would be so romantic if they both stood up for each other against her father and saved their relationship.

On the other hand MaxMan5 has a point. maybe that's how it should end. you know like one of those endings where it shows you how everything turned out years later. Now THAT would be a strong ending. but hey these are just suggestion.

I would like to make a request, I'd like to see (Maybe in a new story.) a focus on some Yugi/Mai smut in perhaps the same narrative timeline as I Love Peaches, if say Anzu goes to New York to study dance and Yugi's left on his own Mai takes advantage.

Anyway, whatever you write next, I hope its as good as the last couple of stories you've written.

I thought Chapter 9 was excellent but I would have loved to have seen the possible chapter where Anzu has to watch Yugi fuck Mai while not being allowed to touch herself and then give it to her at the end of the chapter. (You didn't say that, I'm just adding in.)

Anyway, I'm sad to hear you're ending the story but completely understand why. This is a great Yugi/Anzu smut story. I hope you can think of a plot for another or another Yugi/Mai story somewhere down the line.

I'm thinking that the final chapter should take place years in the future, after Yugi and Anzu have gotten married and had a couple of kids; that way Anzu's boobs will be even bigger, and Yugi can drink lots of milk from them.

great story dude! but give it a good, strong finishing chapter!

Will there be more chapters to this story, I've really enjoyed it so I would like to see it continue?

I liked the story a lot so far and hope that there will be more chapters, but if you don't want to go any further with your story, that'll be okay too! If the story does continue and you're looking for ideas, you could do a situation where Anzu, Mai and Yugi are all going to a costume party together; with a common theme regarding their outfits (for example, Yugi is dressed up a animal trainer, with Mai and Anzu being dressed up as a pair of big cats [see the website Very Latex for an example of a suitable big cat costume] with a collar and leash around each of the girls' necks for Yugi to lead them around, for their big entrance to the party). What none of the other people attending the party know, or even realize, is the fact that both Anzu and Mai are locked into their outfits somehow (in my example: both the collars are lockable while they are covering the neck zippers, which'll preventing the either of the two girls from taking their suits off) and Yugi has the key to the padlocks on his person! After they leave the party (either in the nearby park or at one of their houses), Yugi has the girls act out the role of their costumes (in my example the girls have to crawl on all fours and basically act like cats, maybe even drink from a bowl in a feline manner) before they have sex...