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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I still think it's an awesome idea for the story. Don't feel discouraged with a lack of reviews - it's still a great fic and I'll keep reading it till it's finished :)(The other one too, BTW. Seems kinky - I like kinky.)
Keep up the good work :)
Keep up the good work :)
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOAH!!! this looks SO interesting!! HAHA!! i was wondering who it was...very interesting to make it so that joey is his new name!! HAHAHA!! and seto a chef?? hhhhmmm?? HAHAHA!! this looks promising!! thanks!!
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
interested, and a little confused. please continue
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I maintain my "please continue" opinion. Why would he take a deck of cards? Also, during breakfast you wrote "break up the break" instead of bread, I assume. I like it.
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm definitely intrigued! It starts great, can't wait for more!
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor Joey. What a terrible place to wake up. I'm making my own assumptions of how this will play out and am excited to see the actual route