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for The Golden Couple

by DancingKirby

schedule October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hm. I had thought from your summary that this would be fifty sentences using the prompts in a few paragraphs. I have to admit that seeing the way you laid this out was a bit of a detractor, since it looks more like an assignment in its formatting.

I found numbers twenty-nine and thirty-four amusing. And number thirty-eight was so typically male!

Thank you for sharing this glimpse of their characters. I would be curious to see how you present them in a cohesive story.

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