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October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Milly here!
Hehe, the yaoi OVA watching explains the line 'you guys are like those boys in BL manga who are in denial of each other' (or something similar) - I thought that line was rightfully hilarious! XD
YES!!! Your Jounouchi's calling/trade of choice is cooking!!! It is the same for me! He would make such a good, dedicated and talented cook, ne?
So Kaiba is getting overprotective... I wonder where this will all lead... will Jou earn his respect as a man and a mate? I can't wait for the next updates!
Milly
Hehe, the yaoi OVA watching explains the line 'you guys are like those boys in BL manga who are in denial of each other' (or something similar) - I thought that line was rightfully hilarious! XD
YES!!! Your Jounouchi's calling/trade of choice is cooking!!! It is the same for me! He would make such a good, dedicated and talented cook, ne?
So Kaiba is getting overprotective... I wonder where this will all lead... will Jou earn his respect as a man and a mate? I can't wait for the next updates!
Milly
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Augh noooooooooooo!!! I don't want Jou to be molested again by those disgusting perverts DX
On a more cheerful note: Yay! Dream sequence as a plot device!!! Genius!
When you mentioned the use of "***" to mark a break in the story, you are being overly cautious (although it is sweet of you :) - it's being used in (fan)fiction widely enough so that readers know about it already. In the same vein, the mention 'dream mode' isn't really obligatory either, since you do mention at the start of the paragraph that it's a dream... Anyway that nightmare was a really neat foreshadowing device!
I'm looking forward to read next chapter! *hands your muse some high fructose candy to keep her alive*
Milly
On a more cheerful note: Yay! Dream sequence as a plot device!!! Genius!
When you mentioned the use of "***" to mark a break in the story, you are being overly cautious (although it is sweet of you :) - it's being used in (fan)fiction widely enough so that readers know about it already. In the same vein, the mention 'dream mode' isn't really obligatory either, since you do mention at the start of the paragraph that it's a dream... Anyway that nightmare was a really neat foreshadowing device!
I'm looking forward to read next chapter! *hands your muse some high fructose candy to keep her alive*
Milly
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far, especially the later chapters. I like where this is going and how their relationship is developing - not too fast, not too slow. Please update soon!
Milly
Milly