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November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. I love your stories.
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hugs hon, haven't heard from ya for a while or seen ya on ... just wondering how you're doing in general and in ficcage writing. pop on the site sometime and drop a line or maybe even opt for a chap in the RR. Love this ficcie as well as the others you are working on. Can't wait for a new chap in any of them.
mofaf1
mofaf1
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January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Can't wait to see what happens next
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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. I bet Kaiba was jealous because he had a crush on JOu. Otogi probably wanted Seto himself so he lied. I really wish they had notices for this site.
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, the_lost_ogg! Glad you're able to update these days! Hopefully another chapter of Deliverance is on its way... xP
Just wanted to drop a quick piece of concrit, because you requested them:
"six hundred yen worth of flowers, hundreds of thousand of yen worth of gifts"
You do realize that this translates into "six dollars worth of flowers, thousands of dollars worth of gifts", right? I was surprised that Bakura had let himself talked into accepting 80 dollars for the cufflinks, but now I get it. xD
Sometimes authors get stuck in only one genre (*cough*me*cough*), but it's nice to see that you are versatile. You do this humor thing quite well! Keep it up!
-Milly
Just wanted to drop a quick piece of concrit, because you requested them:
"six hundred yen worth of flowers, hundreds of thousand of yen worth of gifts"
You do realize that this translates into "six dollars worth of flowers, thousands of dollars worth of gifts", right? I was surprised that Bakura had let himself talked into accepting 80 dollars for the cufflinks, but now I get it. xD
Sometimes authors get stuck in only one genre (*cough*me*cough*), but it's nice to see that you are versatile. You do this humor thing quite well! Keep it up!
-Milly
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!!! Jou kicks major ass !!! And poor Kaiba aww my heart just went out to him and stupid ass Otogi who is just the biggest jerk ever XP ugh!!! I hope Jou/Kaiba get together!!!! I can't wait for more chapters!!!!!
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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*HAPPY SQUEALS* YAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYYAA!!!!!!! Update!! I was afraid this was being deep sixed and forgotten. ;_; I am soo happy that is not the case. I've been reading and re-reading the chapters just waiting for this one. PLEASE do not wait so long for an update again.
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December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would really love to see a short side story with Marik in mini skirt, boots and leash.
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December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the little bit of mischief at the end. Anyways, I wonder when Kaiba will finally realize that Jou is actually crossdressing. Oh well, it is very entertaining to see them squirm. I can't wait for the next update!
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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapters!! Man, I'm liking this one more and more. I had to admit that I'm actually envious of Jou's Prada boots... I would love a pair xD The club part was even more great because you made Jou wear leather pants, that must be the hottest thing *nosebleed*