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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is well written and a lot of fun to read. Nice work.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol awesome, and I love Willoughby. :-D A great place to set it too there's something so relaxing and yet sensual about getting your hair washed. I'd definitely be interested in reading an AFF level ending!
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
would definatly like to see some joey seto action in the store room, awsome fic very original!
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PG!?!?!?!?!? Conclusion?!?!?!? No?!?!?!?! Please, no? Or at least, please no PG?!?!
Seriously, though, I love the OC, and even though Mokuba as a plot device is tried and true, you've painted a terribly cute picture of him as a character. If more of those two happen to be in the next chapter, it'd be terribly good fun. Or maybe the next chapter after that. This just seems to have epic potential written all over it.
Seriously, though, I love the OC, and even though Mokuba as a plot device is tried and true, you've painted a terribly cute picture of him as a character. If more of those two happen to be in the next chapter, it'd be terribly good fun. Or maybe the next chapter after that. This just seems to have epic potential written all over it.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I love that Mokuba likes the naked soldier.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Honey!! I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! hahahaha you made me laugh so much!!! Please keep writing because it is wonderful and I am dying to read more! Thanks so much for sharing and hope to read more soon!
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh!! I forgot! please no PG *puppy eyes*! I would love to die from severe nosebleeding!!! hahahaha xP