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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You update so fast! I love the particular AU you shaped for the canon characters - you took great care in including all of them and that's sweet!
That part had me laugh so hard:
"You don't seem to have a problem with Ishtar and Bakura."
"But that's Bakura and Malik," Mokuba protested. "They could never be called normal under any circumstance."
Haha!
Keep writing, and good luck with moving!
Milly
That part had me laugh so hard:
"You don't seem to have a problem with Ishtar and Bakura."
"But that's Bakura and Malik," Mokuba protested. "They could never be called normal under any circumstance."
Haha!
Keep writing, and good luck with moving!
Milly
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I hope Joey can make it up to Kaiba and be honest with him when they meet again.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope they will get together this time.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I don't know who hit him although, I suspect it was Kaiba who hit and caught him. Maybe this time they can do it right.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope Mai is not going to cause trouble. Kaiba is an idiot.
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good luck and good chapter. Seto is still misunderstanding everythin and Jou, too. They really need to talk.
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July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is womderfully written. I love the flashbacks being used to set up the emotional interplay. Can't wait to see Seto's reaction to Mai coing back into Joey's life.
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July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting quite interesting...now I'm hooked! I can't wait for you to update...have a safe trip and all the best in college...
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah ha! and this one too! ~ I'm such a sucker for what looks to be a "and then they came to their senses" story.
I'll be off to FF.net to read the chapters there ...
(P.S. Live the little GIF in your profile
I'll be off to FF.net to read the chapters there ...
(P.S. Live the little GIF in your profile
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start...I can't wait to read more...update soon.