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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like your tendershipping! You have got to write more! *prod, prod*
schedule
June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a pretty interesting take on Ryou and Bakura's relationship. It's nice when there's psychological abuse over just physical on Bakura's end. Nice use of imagery and language. I noticed a few run on sentences that were a bit distracting, but other then that nice try on your first angst piece