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for Deliverance

by thelostogg

person tomboy17
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love it its great ,and kaiba oh man .
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh god.. Did Jou really kill him? And Shizuka died? I'm sad now.. But Kaiba, you fucking moron, what the hell made you do all that?!.. And did you say that your brain had to have FUN?!?! Strange woman :P.
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing because I am eating my nails here!!! hahahaha Love it!!!
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. What makes it great for me is their characterisation - Jou seems pretty on top of things, and will give as good as he gets, but Kaiba still has a little bit of the bastard in him. Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Utterly creepy and fangasmic. I just love how you turn those story to the darkest way darling :D
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
God, you're awesome! And remember - starting new stories is good for you! And for us. Especially for us.
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is great...I can't wait to see were it goes...pls update soon!
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes. ^_^
person Animom57
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Fun" eh? ... strange woman you. :p

As with your other pieces, this grabs us quickly and doesn't let go. Dark and sad and ... yeah.

P.S. Wasn't til I read through it the second time that 'Tani = Hirutani. Nice detail.
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a very interesting story so far, I'm excited to see where it goes, especially after having read your other wonderful stories.