rate_review Reviews

Ha ha, I'm actually reading Trollope right now. I think his book is hysterical. Then again it has taken me almost a year to read half of it. I'll finish it some day and then hang it on my wall like a trophy head.

Great story. I'm not certain how you're going to save Jou. I'm anxious to find out.

Aside from the few spelling and grammar mistakes which I will attribute to the general chaos of any type of move ... This is an excellent chapter and I can't wait to see more. Hope you post this up on LD soon too.

Hugs, mofaf1

Long chapters are awesome and it was definitely worth the waiting. I like when they can have intelligent conversation and it's nice they're both actually men, instead one of them (mostly Jou) being this whiny, crying... well, 'woman'. And no 'puppies' in this one, which is awesome. I enjoy it really much and can't wait for next update! :) I think you're actually my favourite author here, so I'm gonna wait patiently :D

It's good that you are writing again and updating this story. Take care of yourself.
-Milly

OK, I won't ask, but in any case, it is good to see you back. I love this story and I love those cats. Jou and Seto both have so many issues and you write about them so well.

Hugs hon, haven't heard from ya for a while or seen ya on ... just wondering how you're doing in general and in ficcage writing. pop on the site sometime and drop a line or maybe even opt for a chap in the RR. Love this ficcie as well as the others you are working on. Can't wait for a new chap in any of them.

mofaf1

Ooh... so there was more to that than met the eye... I wonder what kind of trouble is going to come up next? I love how twisted your stories are and I shall look forward to your next chapter. ^_^

Also, I went and read that Powerball thing. LOL. I like their style. Then they mentioned that you shouldn't run with scissors so I had to go and set this up:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v224/Atom_Bunny/SimsAgain/JoeyScissors.jpg

Heh - maybe I should stick to playing sims. ^_^'

New chapter! Made me happy.
They're both really screwed up - just how I like them most. Can't wait to read more!
Not a constructive review but I had to write something anyway.

P.S. I've just discovered I can't play Powerball. Sadface.

If your goal was to confuse the hell out of me, then congratulations, you passed the class. What is going on here?! XD. I really REALLY wanna know what Jou and Temari talked about!! Iiihh, I'm so curious. Jou must've had all the time in the world to read depressing fancy victorian peotry?

Love the story. Poor Jou, Poor Seto. I think Seto probably needs to open up a bit to the councelor about what is going on ... dr. patient confidentiality should stop her from going to the police about either of them I think (not sure how that agreement is worded specifically but I know for confessionals it stops the one listening to the confession from being able to go to the cops in theory). Seto might need all the help he can get with Jou and she would probably be the one to know what type of medications could give some help or draw out a bit more specifically what the issue is. Seto just doesn't have the type of experience and by giving Jou medications - especially perscription type medications or illegal types - he could cause Jou more physical and mental damage than good. The OC seems pretty good and would be a good addition to the story, wonder if Seto might hire her on as a permanent member of his private staff just to help him and Jou both deal with issues they each have from the events in and before this story ... both will probably be the type of thing that requires long term observation and treatment. Having her around would also be a good thing for Jou, Seto, and Mokuba since she would be able to spot danger signs a bit earlier than the others would and be able to help with counteracting them in a quick and efficient manner; perhaps also offering suggestions that might be otherwise in-obvious to the others involved since she would be considered more of an objective observer once she realizes that her status as lover no longer applies between her and Seto. (assuming he isn't going to be in a threesome with her and Jou that is)