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by thelostogg

schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know this is an old story, but it was really nice to revisit one of my favorite fight/fuck couples. Personally I feel it's one of the best Seto/Jou stories out there. I really enjoyed it. My only complaint would be that I wanted even more sex scenes between the two, but then again, keeping that tension going made the final scene that much hotter so I can't complain too much. Excellent work!
person tag your it
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I happened upon this story while searching for something to read during a small bout of insomnia. I haven't read any Yugioh fics in a while and was hoping to find something to help dull my overactive mind. After reading an uncompleted piece of work I came across your story. By the second chapter I had changed my plans of joining the local revelry for Super Bowl and Mardi Gras to complete it. Your work fascinates me and I am anticipating the next part in this series. I will check back once Mardi Gras has ended to see any updates and maybe check out your blog. Your writing is captivating and I have a lot of work to do before the season ends and can ill afford to read more before it is done. Thank you for the great read.
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love everything I've read by you, but this? This made me laugh so hard I choked. It was epic fun, great pace, true to character and of course, pushed the boundaries between artistic insanity and deluded obsession. Absolutely wonderful. Looking forward to part two!
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you're back, if only slightly! :D . Seto must have done some serious training, to get back up on his feet like that again! I really, really hope Jou and him get their strange violence-filled happy ending. I would pay lots of imaginary money to see the transition from Professor Montgomery to BAMF Lynn, that must be really interesting!
I don't really know what to write, I just loved it, and I hope to see more from you in the future!
person bahen
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad that this reached a conclusion. I think I'm surprised that the end came as quickly as it did. And even though I enjoyed the ending, I really feel like I am left hanging by it. Hope you don't think me presumptuous here, but it really feels like there should be something more to conclude this, rather like the last chapter you tagged onto Fixation. I'm not opting for love and roses, but it would be nice to know that Jou is coping and Kaiba is keeping up.
person SerenaJ
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. Just Thank You. So worth the wait. Thank you.
person bahen
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoops, just read the notes at the bottom of the page, and see you mention a part 2. Only thing is, I don't know if you are serious or not.....
person SerenaJ
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Only someone as callous and cold as a knife-wielding assassin could slip so quietly in my head, slit my poor brain open, and leaving me hanging without even the warning of "WIP". Now, I wait and hope - much like Seto - that you will return. Such a sharp knife and i have no defense. Cut me again, Oog; for you, i bleed.
person Rain
schedule April 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I could not put this down. As much as I like happy endings, I feel like if you ended the fic now, it would be satisfying for me. I'm captivated by this dark storyline and your ability to breathe new life into these characters. I do hope you keep writing! I look forward to your next update.
person aleeusha
schedule March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you need more, i keep staring at my phone witshing the internet would work so i could read more of your and your stuff. you is awesome... did you know that
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