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December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is good story, just stop using "Said" often
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April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writer and have a very intriguing storyline going here. There are a few technical inaccuracies, especially in how a duel works, but that's not too bad. The storyline is pulling me in so that I actually want to kill Bakura if he even lays a finger on Lana. All I can really say is, "Please write more!"