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May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Actually, it's one of the best stories I've read in a while! I especially enjoyed the cake descriptions. They were somehow... sexy. XD
Yugi was on top! Woot! There isn't enough of that on this site. <_<
I don't know if you wanted to do a chapter fic or just a one-shot, but you should definitely write more of this. I'm hooked! :)
Also, hypervirgin. I lol'd. XD
Yugi was on top! Woot! There isn't enough of that on this site. <_<
I don't know if you wanted to do a chapter fic or just a one-shot, but you should definitely write more of this. I'm hooked! :)
Also, hypervirgin. I lol'd. XD
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May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This needs more reviews/hits. Srsly.
I love, love, love how you made Yugi the seme instead of Yami, and with a justifiable explanation, too (he really wanted that cake)! That, and I couldn't stop laughing through all the words you used for the demon-speech. Bakura and Marik's conversation was absolutely hilarious. But my favorite line (or lines, rather) had to be "Wait. Hypervirgin. Oh shit." I nearly snorted my milk there. xD Anyway, a wonderful combination of sexy, funny, cute, and downright strange. I hope to see more from you like this!
I love, love, love how you made Yugi the seme instead of Yami, and with a justifiable explanation, too (he really wanted that cake)! That, and I couldn't stop laughing through all the words you used for the demon-speech. Bakura and Marik's conversation was absolutely hilarious. But my favorite line (or lines, rather) had to be "Wait. Hypervirgin. Oh shit." I nearly snorted my milk there. xD Anyway, a wonderful combination of sexy, funny, cute, and downright strange. I hope to see more from you like this!
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awe I just love a good, Yami/Yugi, smut/fluff tale. thanks for sharing.