rate_review Reviews

I think this story was wondefully done and I would love to read more. I just got started on Adult Fanfiction so I havent figured out how to add a story to my alerts list but I will the moment I figure out how. I really enjoyed this :)

I really, really like where you've gone with the story. I have a particular inexplicable fondness for this version of this pairing, where Ryou has an unhealthy dependence on the spirit. Also, this is one of the most well written fics of this pairing I've read in a while. I hope you'll eventually continue it. :)

Hun I just found your story again and fell in love all over! Please please please, dont let this sit in the dark corners of your computer again D:
It's almost 2011, it's not too late lol I really wanna see this finished, sincearly ~Passing Reader

I love your style of writing. I was so enthralled by this story I didn't make it to bed on time and had a rather short night until my alam went off.
I have to admit I never really thought about them as their past self ... for me they always were seperate people but your explanation is much more reasonable, realistic. To my shame I never much thought of their character differences either but you did and that made me think again. Bakura talks all the time ... except he's mad and Yami rarely talks much, he's much more the observer and does interference when the situation becomes too bad (in his opionion of course) than he talks I guess.
Please wright on.
Take a look at my profile and you'll find yourself there in the recommended reading.
Keep smiling ... and writing please.

I absolutly loved this fic! It totally opened my eyes to a new way of seeing Bakura, and the fact that some of its cannon just tickles me pink! XD I never would have thought of Ryou ever being portayed as greedy, but it's a refreshing change from all the other fiction out there that insists that they're angels and have no darker flaws :p
I can't wait to see more of this, and if there were ratings your would be 10/10 all the way through :D Thank you so much for sharing, until next time! ~Passing Reader

Loving this story so far! I just adore the relationship you've given Ryou and Bakura, and can't wait to see it go further. Hope to see the next chapter soon!

I have only just read all this today! I can't wait for you to update. :D I love Ryou and Bakura in this. Good story so far! :)

Absolutely adore this story. I love stories that involve Ryou's struggle with the spirit inside the Sennen Ring. You're taken a rather odd twist with most of the characters. I always imagined Evil Bakura to have been a little more... well evil in the beginning. And that you have made Ryou a bit more internally corrupted than most interpret him. And the relationship between Yugi and Atemu is also something I've never read before. But I love it all the same. Please please please update soon, I cannot wait to see what you do with the story. - KD

Very interesting. Thank you for updating this wonderful story once more! Please do so again when you feel inclined to do so.

I am so in love with this story. I recently started reading off of adultfanfiction.net again because I was upset about the lack of good RyouxBakura fics off of fanfiction.net. You've really done a great job. I feel like Bakura is slightly out of character, but I do enjoy the way he's characterized, and it feels real enough to me that I can enjoy the story. I like the idea of Ryou have dark tendencies and the way you have him handle himself feels so right to me. Great job.

P.S.

I love you. ;)