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for Dance puppy Dance.

by GingaPrayers

schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love how this story is going so far. Some facts are repeated in the narrative but you have good details in there :) I cant wait for the next chapter. I already have a theory as to what happened to joey so I want to see if I'm right or not... which means you have to write another chapter..... soon... Really soon lol!
person JamzyOne
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's a good start. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it and hopefully reading the backstory.^_^
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This looks like a good story. I do hope that you explain a little more about Joey. Like why he ran away from Seto in the first place.