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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering why this didn't have that many reviews until I saw you had to log in to review. XD
I have intensely mixed feelings about this story. First off its well written, sensual, and its a pairing I really enjoy. I even think the possibility of our thief seducing Ryou, proving his worth to him and getting him to trust him enough to do kinky things in bed is hot. What I'm leery about is how you empathize on getting Ryou to participate in BDSM (or so your summery suggests).... I generally find that people who write such fictions at the very most only know what they've read up on in forums or books and at the very worse write completely from their imaginations and fantasies. Having the Thief 'turn' Ryou into a slave or a toy would conflict with the fact that Ryou has a strong personality, and hasn't already been taken in by a Master he already knows and trusts to an extent (Atem)... among other things. So I really don't know what to think. Are you going to completely blow my mind and make me take back my leery feelings and bow to your writing? Or am I going to stop reading this after the 2nd chapter?
I have intensely mixed feelings about this story. First off its well written, sensual, and its a pairing I really enjoy. I even think the possibility of our thief seducing Ryou, proving his worth to him and getting him to trust him enough to do kinky things in bed is hot. What I'm leery about is how you empathize on getting Ryou to participate in BDSM (or so your summery suggests).... I generally find that people who write such fictions at the very most only know what they've read up on in forums or books and at the very worse write completely from their imaginations and fantasies. Having the Thief 'turn' Ryou into a slave or a toy would conflict with the fact that Ryou has a strong personality, and hasn't already been taken in by a Master he already knows and trusts to an extent (Atem)... among other things. So I really don't know what to think. Are you going to completely blow my mind and make me take back my leery feelings and bow to your writing? Or am I going to stop reading this after the 2nd chapter?
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April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that, more please! :)
Kuro
Kuro
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April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you've definitely got me interested! i love that Ryou's not a pushover, that he's actually telling Bakura no! i'm curious what's coming next... and when the bondage comes in! XDD
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April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This story has peaked my interest and I look forward to Bakura convincing Ryou...I think that will be very interesting. Thank you for a great chapter and I look forward to more.
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April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, nicely written.
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April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woot! I haven't seen gemshipping in a while! Now it's all tendershipping it seems. Can't wait for an update, I'll be waiting! (which sounds creepier than one would think)