rate_review Reviews

I want see what happened when yugi finsh the puzzle. please write more of it. thank you

Absolutely fantastic. I can't wait to read more. *grins* I'll lend my muses if it'll help! lol

This is an absoloutly fantastic beginning!!! I can't wait to see what will happen if he solves the puzzel!!! And when he meets Atem!!! Will it be like the anime that Atem doesn't remember the past!!! I hope not!!! And then Zorc will also be released!!! I hope everythimg is going to be ok!!! I so can't wait for more!!! I would be totally happy if you could notify me if you update cause I very rarely check the yugioh part of AFF!!! My mail is kuraitenschi@web.de !!! Thanks a lot and see you again soon!!!

Give Yugi a puzzle and he'll work for hours on end to get it solved. *giggles* I like the changes to his design here. Brown instead of amethyst and not spiky hair. Very good contrast between him and Yami here. Awesome job on this chapter. *beats a two by four over story Seto's head for hurting the Mutou family like that*

Absolutely incredible! I love this and can't wait for more.

Oh wow, that was awesome! I can't wait to read the next chap!