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for Dark pasts, Darker Secrets

by KyoSlave87

schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this. :).It's good to see Bakura work for it. It's sad to think of him without emotions.. I'm really looking forward to reading about Seto and Jou's fight :D. And please don't make Jou an imbecile of sorts, it breaks my heart.. Please update soon :)
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to be the first reviewer! Comments are like crack for fic writers ;) The bedroom scene with Bakura and Ryou was fun to read. The ring shaped birthmark intriged me. I really enjoyed the cute scenes between Yami and Yugi, very sweet. Keep it up.
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty intriging so far and pretty well written. It would be fun if Ryou was made the "bitch" of the school. The scene with Malik in the room was entertaing. Keep it up!