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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Other than the few grammatical and spelling errors I really liked the idea that you have for this fic. I love all YGO fics set in Egypt.
I have to admit that Atemu's heartless Egyptian ruler self is difficult to accept, but for the purpose of your story I'm willing to give him a chance. I hope that you will continue this fic. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I have to admit that Atemu's heartless Egyptian ruler self is difficult to accept, but for the purpose of your story I'm willing to give him a chance. I hope that you will continue this fic. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.