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July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww I REALLY liked this!!!
It was hot and romantic and dramatic and just fantastic!!!
Simply couldn't stop reading it
great job!!
It was hot and romantic and dramatic and just fantastic!!!
Simply couldn't stop reading it
great job!!
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May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my, what a chapter. can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you can make jou happy or at least not miserable.
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May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kaiba... you are such an ass.. on the inside he is like an 8-year old attention-and-love-seeking little kid who dosen't understand FUCKING BOUNDAIRES...*cough-cough*. But Mokuba is cute ^_^
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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. I hope you have a happy ending
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April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooh that was so good!! Loved the chapter!! ^_^ Hope you update soon and hope there's lemony goodness coming up soon... *_*
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. Kaiba you, you--!!!!! How dare you?! Poor Joey, he's royally screwed. And poor Yugi, he dosen't understand why his best friend dosen't want to look at him. Is Yami still there, in the present time? If he ever came out when Joey was present, Joey would run for his life!
I have this urging feeling to slap Kaiba around a bit....
I have this urging feeling to slap Kaiba around a bit....
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dang, and I thought Kaiba was going to be at least halfway decent to Joey after they finally left Egypt... Damned stuck-up bastard!! xD
I can't I didn't check back sooner!!! I had three chapters waiting for me... You update fairly quickly, kudos for that!!
Loved the sex scenes, although I kinda hope once Kaiba's less of an ass that they'll be a little more... I dunno, not romantic but not just sex either, if you know what I mean... xD It's always good to have a middle ground!! xD
I seriously hope Kaiba cuts the crap soon though and stops being an ass... Joey doesn't deserve that after everything he's been through with Atemu!!
I can't remember from the first chapter or not if your bring out the yamis (some stories do and some don't), but if you do, it'd be interesting to see how Joey reacts to Yami... his reaction was already kinda iffy with Yugi as it was!!
Keep up the AWESOME work! ^___^ I love it so far!
I can't I didn't check back sooner!!! I had three chapters waiting for me... You update fairly quickly, kudos for that!!
Loved the sex scenes, although I kinda hope once Kaiba's less of an ass that they'll be a little more... I dunno, not romantic but not just sex either, if you know what I mean... xD It's always good to have a middle ground!! xD
I seriously hope Kaiba cuts the crap soon though and stops being an ass... Joey doesn't deserve that after everything he's been through with Atemu!!
I can't remember from the first chapter or not if your bring out the yamis (some stories do and some don't), but if you do, it'd be interesting to see how Joey reacts to Yami... his reaction was already kinda iffy with Yugi as it was!!
Keep up the AWESOME work! ^___^ I love it so far!
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Kaiba finally stood up to Atemu! Hopefully for Joey too, not just for his own pride.. I hope that Joey has some hidden power, it would be sweet :P
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love your fic!!!!!!!!!
you should find a beta for the spelling .
please update soon
you should find a beta for the spelling .
please update soon
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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! This is really good so far... poor Joey!! Please please, update soon! I wanna see what happens next!