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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really hoping the lady will investigate! Otherwise she would be really crappy at her job! I want Joey to be alright... ;_; Keep writing!
Milly
Milly
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
going to the hospital is going to raise more questions though this is the kind of story i have seen for these two on too many occasions its a story idea i like so i'll continue reading
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's nice how you wrote a strong Joey that can actually throw a good comeback at Kaiba :)
I hope the drug theme was not inspired by personal experience or that of a loved one! I wonder how Joey's going to deal with his father AND his friends AND the gang AND the school AND Kaiba! That's a big burden! Keep writing!
I hope the drug theme was not inspired by personal experience or that of a loved one! I wonder how Joey's going to deal with his father AND his friends AND the gang AND the school AND Kaiba! That's a big burden! Keep writing!
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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Joey's father is horrible. I hope Joey finds the strength to turn the tables. Oh, and I like the substance-abuse theme. I'll be expecting the next chapter: I'm eager to see how Seto will react to that!
Milly
Milly
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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's going good...ur doing well for ur first fic. Keep it up, can't wait to see the next chapter!