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for Carwash, with Extra Wax

by Animom57

person Raykushi
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Again you are the mistress of combining hot scenes with humor! You do it do perfection! Also you write dialog for teenage boys so completely correct that I must believe you have a couple of your own. Joey and Tristan's comments throughout the fic were so perfect. They had me in stitches!

The super-uke!Joey kinda brought me out of the story strictly from disbelief, but I realize it's a humor fic and such things are to be taken in stride! lol. (Also I only watch the Japanese version of the show so it's entirely possible his behavior here is in-character with his English incarnation...)

Anyway, love you and all you do! <3 Thank you for writing such gems!
person Ykarzel
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
gotta love anything that says "dirty" FOUR times in the summary. Loved it the first time, and you're being sooo mean posting bit by bit here :P. I've already read it twice this week, lol. I love J/T, but you don't see it NEARLY as much as you'd expect! Won't say anymore yet cause I don't wanna spoil it!
person Milly
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There is a je-ne-sais-quoi about that story that I like. I'm looking forward to Kaiba's great entrance. Keep writing!
person Kyosuke
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww over already lol X3 XD Please update soon!

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