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for Within the Shadows

by Shuman

person smint45
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is again awonderful story of yours!!!! I absoloutly love your storys!!!! I can't wait for the next part!!! I'm so happy that you are sharing another story of yours with us!!!! I can't wait for more see you soon!!!
P.S Has the blanked a meaning??? Is it a singh of their bonding?? Is he now pregnant???
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
put up chp 3 or i will find you " shes not kiding she will"
shut up shadow
" make me "
gods i hate you
" and whos fault is that "
ignore him hes just a paine cuz he hasnt goten laied
" hay "
hahahahahaha
person Natoya
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* I love this! :D I love the way you described everything; it was like I was there. *grins* And that lemon was hot! You did an awesome job! :D So can't wait for more of this story!
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Shamise this is awesome! I'm looking forward to more of this! Great job on the lemon!
person Yaminisu
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is sweet. Can't wait to hear more of this fic.
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is another great start to another great story. I do have one question though. Will you by any chance be continuing any of your other stories? I really enjoyed reading your stories Ritual's Dance, Shadow Gryphon, and Demon's Virtue. Hope to read more updates to those stories or this story. Keep up the good work, you are a talented writer.
person smint45
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so absoloutly fantastic!!!! I really love you storys!!!!! I can't wait to find out what yami is!!! (Purple blood??) Well anyway please tell Tavia454 that the lemon was wonderful!!! Thank you for the great chappie!!! I'm waiting eagerly for the next update from you!!!! See you!!!
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good start! There's more? I hope.
person tavia454
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Kiss your lemon virginity goodbye! *laughs* Awesome story