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for Within the Shadows

by Shuman

schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
G0ood chapter! Can't wait for the update. Later.
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how long Yugi is going to be scared and when those two (Yami and Yugi) are finally going to get to know each other. But those are questions I wait in great anticipation for in the upcoming chapters.
schedule January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
<3
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, interesting. I honestly wasn't expecting him to be missing at all.

Great job with Yugi's emotions and general confusion about what happened to him. Really enjoyed this chapter.
person Natoya
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter! :D I loved this one! Wow, so he was kept near a week, and then just allowed to return? Hm... Wonder why. Poor Yugi. It must be scary not remembering four days. Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more!
person onidra
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved reading this story it sooo awesome. I love reading anything you write, your a terrific writer
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can imagine how Yuugi must feel.. Waking up confused and unknowing of what happened. Great job as usual, Shamise! Looking forward to the next installment!
person Yaminisu
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wonder when Yami will be returning
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow good chapter! Can't wait for the "Red Eyed" stranger to shows up again, or why/how Yuugi lost four days Oh hurry with the next chapter pleeeease!
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so cool...I really like it and I can't wait for more. This story is like a mystery that I can't wait to be solved.