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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I like having no idea what will come next and that's how I feel about this story so far. The idea is very original and the lemon was very well written (assuming of had a hand in it, right, right?!). Anyways, can't wait to read what you have so far!
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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was certainly unexpected! Honestly, I was thinking, 'what the heck happened to Yuugi?' when I read that last part. Poor Yuugi! Onwards to the next chapter!
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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really like where this is headed. Not sure if you've seen 5Ds but the scene in which the "Red-eyed man" comes in and saves Yuugi from the drunkard reminds me of Yusei in his poncho fighting a bunch of wierdos in a 'Wild West' type setting. It's very interesting actually, their guns turns into duel disks!
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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yuugi! But I think its understandable that he's this confused I mean... it goes from, really really wierd to... normal with scattered bouts of semi-wierd. I hope that made sense. I get a feeling there is some kind of mythology at work in this story but I have yet to figure it out. What or who is the "red-eyed man" exactly? Ugh, I don't know how to use this site so I don't know how to alert this story so I guess I'll just have to check back periodically for updates. Till next time!
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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I do hope you don't keep us waiting for too long. you know the right kind of waiting where it's a good chapter, but not long enough that we'll have to read the story again and again for each new chapter. But yes I loooooooooooooooove this story.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, I was waiting for that update!
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting almost like a mystery but not the murder kind...and I love how he is remembering slowly about what happened with Yami. I can't wait to learn more about the 'tribe' Yami belongs to.
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Hope to find out what happens next.
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February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I put off reading this, but I am so sorry I did. This is a good story and please continue.
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February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really great!!! I really think that Yuugi and Atem need a talk so that yuugi doesn't always freak when he sees his mate!!! Atleast I'm asuming he is his mate!!! I really hope to hear from you soon!!!!