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for You say you like thorns in a rose?

by MorningMoon

person Roxas
schedule April 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice chapter.Yusei though.Didn't know he could pull that off.It would have been better if Aki was the one being tied up but this is good too.
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not too bad, but Akiza using her telekentic powers to keep Yusei tied so he couldn't cum is potentially unhealthy. If a guy or a gal don't pleasure themselves at least once a day, it results in a wet dream. However, this is quite a nice read. Keep it up.
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As the only non Yaoi story of 5D's, this already gets points. Now the domination aspect, that was a neat idea and it kinda makes more sense than I thought it would (and honestly, it's going to be how I see the pairing for the next while >_>). I gotta say though, all those whacks made me wince, Yusei's one tough bastard to take all that.