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for Evading Destiny

by Jeanne

schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! A new chapter! Not much for a lot of action but it works!

*sits and waits patiently for the next chapter* ^_^
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update! *happy dance* I'm glad to see that Seto is aware of the danger from von Schrieder. I look forward to seeing Yami's commentary on Yugi's dueling. Glad to see your update, and I'll be happy to see what you come up with next. Thanks for posting!
person smint45
schedule December 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was some really nice chappie!!! I can't wait for the next chappie!!!
person smint45
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chappie was really great!!! Thank you so much for the fast update!!!! I can't wait for the next part!!!! I totally like Raphael!!! See you again soon!!!!
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I actually love this story cant wait for your next update, which will be soon wont it *chibi eyes* This story is so well thought of one of the best stories I have read so far =^.^=
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Rafael's siblings are adorable. I bet the villagers are descendents of Dartz and Tomoya's people ;) I'm so happy you updated so soon, I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to your next chapter!
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the hunt for Atlantis. Thanks for posting!
person smint45
schedule September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was again absoloutly great!!!! I can't wait for them to find Atlantis!!!!! And the smutt with Dartz was absoloutly HOT!!!! I never thought that this guy could be hot but you make it work!!! Fantastic!!!! I so love your Dartz!!!! The only down point is that you update way to less!!!! But well I will wait patiently for the next installment!!!!! See you again!!!!
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It'd be about right for Jou to sacrifice himself. Thank heavens for Seto stopping him.

Can't wait to see what happens next!
person smint45
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I havn't reviewd in such a long time!!! The last chappies were great!!! All the atemts of their life!!! I wonder why the yamis haven't got suspicious a long time ago!!! And poor jou hope he is going to be alright!!!! At thee graduation party it was really close!!!! I hope that the will find a way to fight the Acolytes!!! I hope to see you soon!!!!