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January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I like it. I'm glad he didn't kill JOu. I hope they can all get out without more deaths.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story. Are you going to continue soon? I'd love to read more of it if you are.
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty intriguing so far. This chapter is like a crossover of Battle Royale and Last House on The Left, so this seems to be going in a very dark direction. I'll be looking forward to reading more.
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story so far, i cant wait to see what will happen!
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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A Good Start you say...well I say a brilliant start. I love how you have action in this story and you are making it great to read...thrilling in fact. Thank you for the great chapter.