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February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write Bakura and Marik, so cruel and wicked. I can't help but feel bad for Ryou but that just means that you're doing a good job writing him. The spanking scene was so darn hot and a good excample of how Ryou and Bakura should be written. You should make Ryou blow Bakura and Marik in the next chapter ;3
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Sorry I don't get here much. I love the story.
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor kids, I'm glad he is there now to help.
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are awesome and this fic is made of win. Continue soon!
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February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh...ohmygawd. I love this fic so much. I've been searching for something like this for ages.
Great 4th chapter! I'm a big Tendershipping fan, and I think you wrote this perfectly! Actually, I like EVERY chapter. I can't wait to see this continued. I wish you the best of luck in your search for internet. Maybe try a public library, if you live close enough to one?
Great 4th chapter! I'm a big Tendershipping fan, and I think you wrote this perfectly! Actually, I like EVERY chapter. I can't wait to see this continued. I wish you the best of luck in your search for internet. Maybe try a public library, if you live close enough to one?
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February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this chapter. Ryou being a Diabetic was great. I can't wait for the next one, to see what kind of 'pet' Ryou is going to be. A good pet or a naughty pet.
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February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter! poor ryou, i cant wait to see what will happen next!!
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January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very sick and depraved.(loved it) This story definitely reminds me of Last House On The Left (the 70's one) where the criminals force the hostages to preform sexual acts in front of them. I'm afraid to read the next chapter. Kidding, no I'm not, keep on writing.
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this one is going. This story is really interesting and very messed up....which makes the best stories. Thank you for another great chapter.
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
^.^ Good! I actually found a fanfic where someone writes more than once a month! You're a very good writer too.